Scene from Concept 12 that uses all terms (Ranbir, Ruthe & Elizabeth)

FADE IN., WANDA and ALBERT are parking by the sideway.

INT- WANDA and ALBERT get out of the car and start walking down the street of Summers Dr. neighborhood
PAN of Summers Dr. neighborhood
DISSOLVED To Wanda and Albert's face.

WANDA

This is such a beautiful neighborhood 

honey, why don't we just live here?

SFX of cop cars passing by. 

ANGLE ON the cop car. 

ALBERT

Actually, i don't think it's a very 

safe neighborhood

CU close up of Wanda's face making the puppy dog eyes. 

Albert

Fine, but if we get killed, it's 

going to be your fault. 

ECU close up of Albert's worried face. 

(V.O.) 

Oh no, what has Wanda gotten us 

into this time.. 

FADE TO BLACK The end. 

                                                            

Concept 38 #1 & #3

1. I don't think ive ever had a conflict that they before. I've never had an ugly conflict because of the different personality.

3. Hero- loving
Crazy
Sensitive
Villain- time.
Fast & evil.

Concept 36 #3

The main conflict for the main characters is going to be that he has to remember his wife, because a while ago he got in a major accident.
Easy ways would be like performing surgery, not getting in the accident
The surgery could go wrong.

Concept 35 #1-3

1. A. Star wars
B. harry potter

2. To be honest, If I was in harry potters shoes, I'd give up. He doesn't give up until voldemort is dead. That's courageous, & I'm pretty sure I would give up against him.
Maybe if I didn't give up, I'd be scared, but I'd practice spells & make myself an awesome wizard/sorceror

3. The last time I took a risk was letting my cat sit in my lap, I have a really bad history with cats, & I've always liked them, but I didn't like going near them too much. I took a risk & let it sit in my lap. Consequences would be still being afraid. The cat didn't hurt me after all. I was definitely satisfied with the outcome.

Critique on nonlinear scripts

I read ruthes script. It's about a man that lives in a senior home. His wife passed away a whole ago so now he's alone. He goes back in time to when he's going to propose to her.
This is nonlinear because he goes back in time. Rewinding.
The conflict is him going back in time. One thing I liked was that she explains the main character in such little words. When you read it, you automatically know what kind of person he is.

Concept 34 #2

Id have to get invisibility.. To get the power I'd have to be smart.. I'd have to use my brain, & think like a villan.

Concept 32 #2

If i had to do a 30 second commercial on insuring a person's possession against damage or loss, i'd state the facts, i wouldn't make it like other commercials' where they just lie to get the audience's attention. I'd state the facts, and i'd have true customers show the audience how it is to have this type of insurance.